With Love

Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

Love, is in the way you look,

As I stand and cook.

My face covered in flour:

Like, I am beauty personified every hour.

 

Love, is when you always listen -

Sometimes it makes my eyes glisten -

To all my foolish patter:

'Cause to me, you know they matter.

 

Love, is when you don’t sleep ever,

When I am down with fever,

Till you sing me to sleep at night:

Holding me in your arms tight.

 

Love, is in a small fight,

Over trivial things, too light.

Later when we make peace,

With hugs and kisses, we tease.

 

Love, is in a brush of our fingers,

An electric rush that lingers,

As we lay side by side:

With nothing betwixt us to hide.

 

Love, is when I wake up slowly,

Your fingers combing my hair softly,

A kiss upon my lips like a blessing:

'Good morning', to me you sing.

 

When I am with you, I know

What Love is all about, and so:

I love you with all my life.

With Love - from your Wife.

 

Author's Note

Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

i felt its more like a song

Reviews

[Love Well Spent]

Aww, this is so sweet! I really, really enjoyed this. Like you, I hope to someday find someone special who I can experience this with. I have so much love in my life - from family, friends, and all my pets, but it's just not the same as the love you receive from that somebody special. This poem clearly expresses that.

As always, thanks for sharing!

[The Dreamer]

thank you :) i guess ill never feel complete till i find someone like this - i dream of him everyday , even though i haven't found him ... yet.

[vspjaguar]

So this is like a gift to your future husband I guess,very romantic! thanks for sharing.

[The Dreamer]

a gift... yea you could call it a gift. :)

[vspjaguar]

nice!

[rnuff]

Aw this is ever so sweet and loving. Wish i could have wrote this.
Simply wonderful and heartfelt.

[The Dreamer]

:D thank you - wish i'd meet someone as sweet and loving as this!

[rnuff]

give it time, i never thought i woudl meet anyone, but 3 years ago i did. and I am a the biggest skeptial person in the world. Love comes to those who wait. : )

[N!LoC]

hold on..! you mean you wrote this as in the future present tense? oh my god... it almost sounds so real like all these things is happening to you ! wow.. what a way to write a poem!

[The Dreamer]

well i dream of little things like these often - so you can say that these things are happening to me (in my dreams) :P

[N!LoC]

oh my.. u really are a true dreamer!

[The Dreamer]

"The Dreamer" LOL

[Deron Alexis]

lol i wrote one of those too i don't think she'll like it though . This was really nice all those small things that couples do and say really a lovely poem

[The Dreamer]

thank you :) n' why not? i thought all girls like love poems :P

[Michael Stevens]

I wish you luck in your quest; they will be so lucky to have such a gifted person!

[The Dreamer]

sweet of you :D thank you.
"they'"?

[Michael Stevens]

Hey, you never know, you might have several to chose from; think positive!

[The Dreamer]

oh like that! i was confused cause this is from a wife, n' i dont wish to marry more than one :P, so when you said 'they'....

[Michael Stevens]

Oh, come on it might be fun to have several husbands. You know, rotating days; "If it's Tuesday, it must be Clem!"

[The Dreamer]

LOL noway! - thats not fun at ALL!!!

[Michael Stevens]

Oh, come on, I think it's a GREAT idea; LOL!

[PoeticVandal]

So emotional..brought tears my eyes.
Wonderful

[The Dreamer]

thank you :) - yea thinking about the beauty of such a love, sometimes brings tears to my eyes too.

[Nithin Purple]

Nice lovely poem!, good rhyme too, properly attired,nicely settled,yous ups down last landings,all stunned,and that in neath middle "An electric rush that lingers" be my pretty catch! i enjoyed them and thanks for this to share:)

[The Dreamer]

:D yes chemistry plays a huge role in love too. glad you liked it and thanks for your review :).

[J Todd Underhill]

Pure emotion here loved the read and I kept thinking about my wife's and I's relation ship and how I love her more than my own existance well penned poetess!

[The Dreamer]

thank you - your reviews always mean a lot to me. well ive got to say this - you wife is one lucky woman! :) someday i hope to find and experience such a love, and then i will cherish it forever :D