With Love

Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

Love, is in the way you look,

As I stand and cook.

My face covered in flour:

Like, I am beauty personified every hour.

 

Love, is when you always listen -

Sometimes it makes my eyes glisten -

To all my foolish patter:

'Cause to me, you know they matter.

 

Love, is when you don’t sleep ever,

When I am down with fever,

Till you sing me to sleep at night:

Holding me in your arms tight.

 

Love, is in a small fight,

Over trivial things, too light.

Later when we make peace,

With hugs and kisses, we tease.

 

Love, is in a brush of our fingers,

An electric rush that lingers,

As we lay side by side:

With nothing betwixt us to hide.

 

Love, is when I wake up slowly,

Your fingers combing my hair softly,

A kiss upon my lips like a blessing:

'Good morning', to me you sing.

 

When I am with you, I know

What Love is all about, and so:

I love you with all my life.

With Love - from your Wife.

 

Author's Note

Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

i felt its more like a song

Reviews

[Love Well Spent]

Aww, this is so sweet! I really, really enjoyed this. Like you, I hope to someday find someone special who I can experience this with. I have so much love in my life - from family, friends, and all my pets, but it's just not the same as the love you receive from that somebody special. This poem clearly expresses that.

As always, thanks for sharing!

[The Dreamer]

thank you :) i guess ill never feel complete till i find someone like this - i dream of him everyday , even though i haven't found him ... yet.

[Beverly Jane]

This is so darling, and so dang beautiful. I love this so much. It is so sweet. BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL. I felt a need to repeat that. :) Wonderful job. c:

[fiery-san]

Such sweet and beautiful poem. Truly, it is more of the everyday moments that counts rather than the amount of events celebrated. Good ^_^

[imdvader]

nice.. your husband is a lucky guy :P

[The Dreamer]

haha :D of course he IS!

[anjali]

likey like!! ..

[The Dreamer]

:D

[Ambereen]

Your perception of love is almost as similar as mine .... Loved it ....

[The Dreamer]

:D glad you loved it :)

[Abhishekizy]

Hiya Dreamer!!! So i was just fluttering through the scripts, came across yours and I must say " thats so chweeeett". Having said that, I am no big fan of love & pain (well that pretty much summarizes the writes on this Site). However I often come out of my character, when sitting on a review chair. So starting on a point blank, what really refines the poem here as maybe not the words but the feelings you wrap around it. This poem would have never been complete without your personal feelings attached and thats what so nostalgiac about it.

On the other note, I just wish your Prince Charming might just delay the approach. Who knows it it might keep you occupied and the readers of your, they woud be certainly disappointed

[The Dreamer]

LOL well i am sure you will find diverse kinds of writing ( not just love and pain) in this site - i have come across many :) i like simple writings that convey a lot of emotions and is meaningful, writings that most people could understand.
noooo , i wish hed come sooner!!! :D who knows maybe i'll write better after i find my prince charming! thank you for the review!!! :D

[being me]

this is cute...a girl's version of a perfect married life...i loved it:)

[The Dreamer]

yea - a PERFECT married life, its easy to dream of and write, but very difficult to achieve i suppose!

[being me]

not if you are in love...

[The Dreamer]

its not about just being in love, its about being in love with the right guy - what i meant was it is difficult to find that right guy! :P

[being me]

no...when you are in love everything just turns out right...there isn't such a thing called as a perfect person..but when you are in love you tend to overlook all those imperfections...isn't that called being in love? when you can forgive and forget?

[The Dreamer]

well i've been in love once - believe me, its not the same! i forgave and i forgot, but sometimes they just slip away , you could never foretell those things :)

[being me]

maybe you thought you were in love.....when the right time comes maybe you'll realize...eternal bliss...

[The Dreamer]

yea - may be :)

[being me]

:)

[floralhorror]

A nice, heartfelt piece
Nicely written and filled with love
You will find the special someone :)

[The Dreamer]

hey thanks !! :) well i'll wait and see :D

[Night]

...a very beautiful loving reflection of things to come...love your pen name by the way...:)

[The Dreamer]

thanks for the review.
:) my pen name... i found nothing better to define myself, when i made this profile :)

[Frieda P]

Lovely, I can't say more. Enjoyed this one with my coffee, great combo. :-)

[The Dreamer]

coffee with a love poem ...... never tried that before :D n' thanks for the review :)

[Frieda P]

what do you think 'coffee and' stands for? ;-)
My pleasure...

[The Dreamer]

LOL :D well - i gave up on coffee recently ! , i guess i'll have try it with tea :P don't think it'll be the same though!

[Frieda P]

Try Vanilla Chai, that might do it for you. ;-)

[The Dreamer]

sure :D