Last Breathe

Dreaded

skies.

Turbulent

rivulets.

Deep 

silence.

Long 

journey.

Charred

souls.

And

ceasing 

breathes.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly simple and furious, well done.

[Jazique]

Nice to describe the last breathes in such few words as it all gose down. it to start reading.o start reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words. Each with a purpose and a sad ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote