April's Wing

In my backyard,
When we were teens,
we build the sand castles of life.
till the time we witnessed the horizons of sea.

I still remember,
Whenever I gazed your hazel eyes,
I found a glint like a star in shimmering skies.
And every time I whispered something
I remember your quiet smile.

Then,
Once we tried to cross the unceasing shores,
even without bidding a goodbye.
But still sometimes I feel.
Even I know, you longing for me.

Yesterday when I crossed the lane,
I found the same glint amidst many eyes.
And when I was still reflecting on my sepia dreams,
you smiled and your eyes uttered me everything.

I still revel the yesterday’s light,
And I flutter my April wings in the air.
you alighted the flickering hope in my life
As you whispered through your incandescent eyes.

Reviews

[Dove]

As i kept reading this beautiful poem kept pulling me in. I love it!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This softly whispered your whimsical imagery to me. I am mesmerized. Whimsical write, and very lovely indeed! :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Lovely....I kept on getting deeper the more I read....Thank you for sharing. This is wonderful.

[Richard Williams]

A lovely and gentle write. Good language and structure.

[Seshat Nidaba]

A very lyrical piece, the line "you smiled and your eyes uttered me everything" was powerful for me. Beautiful, and soothing and eventful!

[Jazique]

Big vocab, very descriptive, metaphores or similies, creativity of emotion and awesome work for the lady with a mgnificient work of art. Nice job.

[Alicia Hirshey]

"In my backyard,
When we were teens,
we build the sand castles of life.
till the time we witnessed the horizons of sea."- you had me from these lines. This poem has beautiful poetic imagery. I love it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly descriptive piece that hangs emotion and solace in the same place, well done

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

oh those lovely eyes and how they whisper of love and promise the moon. Such a wonderful piece!

[LA Lorena]

A very beautiful poem of longing and hope. Your phrasing is just so graceful and gentle.