April's Wing

April's Wing

A Poem by nishantshah2381

In my backyard,
When we were teens,
we build the sand castles of life.
till the time we witnessed the horizons of sea.

I still remember,
Whenever I gazed your hazel eyes,
I found a glint like a star in shimmering skies.
And every time I whispered something
I remember your quiet smile.

Then,
Once we tried to cross the unceasing shores,
even without bidding a goodbye.
But still sometimes I feel.
Even I know, you longing for me.

Yesterday when I crossed the lane,
I found the same glint amidst many eyes.
And when I was still reflecting on my sepia dreams,
you smiled and your eyes uttered me everything.

I still revel the yesterday’s light,
And I flutter my April wings in the air.
you alighted the flickering hope in my life
As you whispered through your incandescent eyes.

© 2011 nishantshah2381


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As i kept reading this beautiful poem kept pulling me in. I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This softly whispered your whimsical imagery to me. I am mesmerized. Whimsical write, and very lovely indeed! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely....I kept on getting deeper the more I read....Thank you for sharing. This is wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A lovely and gentle write. Good language and structure.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very lyrical piece, the line "you smiled and your eyes uttered me everything" was powerful for me. Beautiful, and soothing and eventful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Big vocab, very descriptive, metaphores or similies, creativity of emotion and awesome work for the lady with a mgnificient work of art. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"In my backyard,
When we were teens,
we build the sand castles of life.
till the time we witnessed the horizons of sea."- you had me from these lines. This poem has beautiful poetic imagery. I love it.



Posted 13 Years Ago


A highly descriptive piece that hangs emotion and solace in the same place, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh those lovely eyes and how they whisper of love and promise the moon. Such a wonderful piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very beautiful poem of longing and hope. Your phrasing is just so graceful and gentle.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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