Poetry

Engraving some words on the warp, 

I know ,
the ink will soon precipitate in time.
Still, I continue my journey through these words
and cherish the bliss from every drop I embellish
Ah ! bliss I yearn ,
When I purge my modest slate 
and carve my destiny everyday.

Reviews

[Dove]

I had a GREAT!! time reading this poem. Love the thought.

[Dreamer]

wow!! Lovely...I really like this alot:) The complete bliss we receive from writing poetry. Short and truthful:)

[Sukriti Suki]

Lovely....Deep thought and so crisp and short. Real nice.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

nice

[sherwin]

Nice piece. Whole. Loved the last line.

[Layla J Omorose]

Short, sweet and to the point. Well done.

[Jazique]

Nice creative and short. Very good vocabulary and puncations. Well done from a readers view and who know maybe even a english teachers view you would get an "A+".

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A landscape of imagination and endless possibility, you paint a vivaed picture

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this put me in mind of how we poets and writers have the freedom to create our own worlds with our words...love this!