Riposte

Penned on Februrary 22 2011

Why the sun brightens our sky?

or why there is a serene moonlight?

there are always some reasons,

but we always fail to understand.

 

And yesterday, when I met you at the cross lane,

the same sun brightened my day,

and the moonlight kept me awake.

 

On that night,

You shimmered like the starlet in the skies,

I followed you everywhere, even in your dreams

But somewhere, I was still lonely waiting for you

on that bench, where you dropped your earrings in twilight.

 

And today,

When I crossed your casket draped in black,

with the parish hymning His words of solace,

in vain, my infallible mind  tried to reason,

the same lunatic night and the aberrant sunlight

 

 

Author's Note

I have rectified all the typos, sometimes am very much reluctant to run a spell check

Reviews

ever so amazing! words are read liek air. Wonderful writing!

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Nice. Very well put.

[a_mystery]

"And today,
When I crossed your casket draped in black,
with the parish hymning His words of solace,
in vain, my infallible mind tried to reason,
the same lunatic night and the abberant sunlight."

Nice poem..There are many things that we dont know why they happen. And poets delight in drawing beautiful interferences from them. Loved the way you think.
There is one piece of advice or you, please use spell-checker before publishing your poems. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading it.

[roy mccarthy]

this is a good write!
i enjoyed reading it!

[Davy Jones]

"in vain, my infallible mind tried to reason,
the same lunatic night and the abberant sunlinght"

I could feel the strong emotions running through this one. Very nice.
(you could perhaps use a spellchecker and grammar corrector; just a suggestion)

[DearSweetAgony]

WOW
Your words are very dreamy.
They are like a peaceful lullaby.
I REALLY enjoyed reading this.
Flawless Job!