Half Full

Half Full

A Poem by nishantshah2381
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Penned on December 15 2008

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I heard a chime,
when the Hell collided with time.
The Villa still had some past ruins
where even some souls were still awake
from leaving the ramifications of past behind

There he yells.
Jehadi I am.
Jehad is my name.
Messenger of Allah,
Messiah of my domain.

Only for his some delusions
Massacre he begins,
And forays the innocents.
his only concern Jannat “Heaven in Hell”

Even he knows, he is the pawn of some mind.
A scapegoat of predefined time,
Even Jannat is far beyond the reach.
And the bullets just piercing his every gist,

His fundamentals are still potent,
but his deeds are like the gnawer’s bite.
divesting all the faces of mankind,
he tries shroud the pall,
on many gritty faces of time.

Amidst the bedlam of cult,
A bullet chases the ruins
where he bred his sadist fad,.
And fades the obscured skies,
Where the birds babble.
and again the hazel light shimmers
on the face of ‘Jannat’
which his soul still tries to attain.

© 2011 nishantshah2381


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This is amazing.. you have weaved an intricate flow to this thought provoking theme... full of vivid imagery making this a powerful read. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely done strong and wonderfully writiten. As to go to religion is much of topic to be told but, not one much touch but, you did good. It makes you think and I think you did an exceellent job and you should keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely written, intense, memorable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is good...you chose a bold topic and delivered greatly...enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


FYI, I have read the poem, as per requested. I'd be happy to discuss in private :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery and highly descriptive, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very beautiful and powerful. Not many people right now write about religion, and it's different to hear. Great job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very good and actually caught me by surprise the choice of topic and religion you decided to use. Very good

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Very powerful imagery, and true ideas.

Posted 13 Years Ago


amazing piece of art

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