Plebian

Plebian

A Poem by nishantshah2381
"

Penned on July 16 2008

"
I saw a man walking down the streets
scalding all the other democratic,
he had question for every living on earth,
and marched towards the house where turkeys lurk.

Everyone jested at his eccentric taste,
Even the prefects abased his righteousness.
but words failed to wither this mortal grain,
as he crossed the hedge with the void in his brain.

There he reached the mighty Colosseum ,
Standing tall was the statue of political saint,
in one piece cloth and with a big soiled cane.
where the hypocrites blinded their own eyes,
and their heads uttered the unfathomable lies.

He tried to enter the antechamber,
repleted with house full of unholy turbans.
then grabbed hold of one of this diabolic saint,
and asked him the questions he had framed.

And then he tried to reach another hermit,
who once mouthed,”wealth is the oblation of republic”.
as the eccentric fellow asked questions on blasphemous realm,
there came the reply, “i don’t mind to crib on the issues for more cream.”

With his futile eyes and some impish smile,
The flake lad walked the steps again,
But towards his base where he reigned.
His When,Where,Why and What are still unrequited,
And his mind behaves like a chiseled plebeian.

© 2011 nishantshah2381


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A depth of intellect and imaginative acuity.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice the poem really looked into depth and have wonderful description"Impish smile" and good frame of mind on the subject. Excellent job on the writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem has a great meaning to it.
Wonderful thought and great imagery.
I really enjoyed reading this.
You are very talented with words.


Posted 13 Years Ago


good flow and imagery I liked it good read



Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

I love this. A story within a poem. And the content was astonishingly wonderful! I truly enjoyed this so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent job.. well written :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the word choices in the poem. Old Rome

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the same but not good enough..............excellent piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost succulent, I could taste your words well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Multi-meaning to me. Your words are impressive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

225 Views
12 Reviews
Added on April 23, 2011
Last Updated on April 23, 2011

Author

nishantshah2381
nishantshah2381

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



Writing