Soul

Penned on March 5 2008

Man:
“Ah Blessed soul!!!
Is there a reason for me to wander in these forlorn skies
I never uttered words of aspersion for anyone in my minds
Why I am the only soul reaping the fruits of righteousness
Please free me from the cycles of incarnation !!!!!
Please enlighten this humble soul!!!!!!”

Lord:
“Ah modest soul!!!!
I never deprived you from the rights of enlightenment
Even I never snarfed your days of raptus delight
but whenver I free you from your faded fate
And every time when I weigh your ashes in my scale
I find void in your soul and ashes heavy in disdain.

Reviews

[Mark Wallace]

Nice. When I think about stuff, this is the sort of stuff I think about, so I enjoyed this.

[Sukriti Suki]

Oh this is good..very good.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost church worthy, a prayer that sleeps with the angels and repels the demons of this world, well done, good read

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and strong prayer. Life can be hard. We see the pain and suffering. We can do little to save but maybe a few. Leave us not content with a world where few kind people seem to be standing strong for the weak and poor. A powerful poem. Made me think tonight. Thank you.
Coyote

[Lourisa]

So unique - I enjoyed reading it. Some stuff to think about too.

[A.E. Surdam]

Very interesting. I enjoyed. :)

[paul]

ah, awesome. fantastic stuff. and it's nice to hear from the Lord