Fine tuned disaster

Penned on February 15 2008

All these days, 

I retrospect my future. 

While I am the failure of my past.

Time just unveiled it raiments again,

And I am stranded in my past.

Reviews

[Jazique]

Nice word play as sometime we do not notice but the reason were not moving coward is because were stuck in the past. Anyways well done a simple short poem.

[Dove]

I never forget the past because of.. pretty much what coyote poetry said. It reminds us to be better and not repeat. I had a great time reading this poem it was really interesting.

[Coyote Poetry]

The past is the information we hold on to. To remind us to be better and not repeat. We must go forward with kindness and good dreams. I enjoyed this poem. A type of poem that open doors to many questions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote