That Kind of Weather

Describing feelings through different weathers.

They asked her

How are you feeling, dear?

It’s hard to say, she replied


It’s like that kind of weather, she smiled.

 

The rain was not gentle

It was not calm

The rain was harsh and severe

Yet it wasn’t one which brought her harm

 

Flurries of snow followed suit

She was standing alone
The rain introduced her to the gushing wind

She felt it in her bones,
For they intertwined with her feelings

 

The cold was biting

It threw her to her knees
She found it difficult to reach out
So she realised she was better off lying down

She looked up to the sky

The raindrops hit her cheeks with strength

The snow brushed her cold feet once again

 

The torrential storm greeted her
She felt the worst pain

The snow turned against her,

It started becoming mean

The blustery wind pierced her soft skin

Everything was loud, the sky was screaming

She had no control of what she was feeling

 

Everything was fading

 

The warmth awoke her

She was still alone

But she was no longer hurting
She was relieved
The storm was no longer to be seen

The cheerful breeze played with her hair
She was surrounded by the cleanest air

She looked up to the sky
She was welcomed by the prettiest art

Colours and beautiful rays of light

It was time for a new start

 

How are you feeling, dear?

Oh, just like that kind of weather. 

Author's Note

I wrote this in 10 minutes and I left it unedited because I wanted to try and challenge myself - Please ignore grammar problems and I want to thank everyone who has kind words to offer. I appreciate it, really! :)

Reviews

[¿]

It's like a flow of real life when it feels like dream!!
You pass through the roughest and at the end discover some soothe.
Will we ever yearn for relief if sufferings doesn't ever appear? No right?!
Life has to experience every will and woe until you understand where was your lesson learnt!!
It's very touching poem written, Thanks for sharing Nisha😊

[Nisha M.]

I agree with you, Tahsin! There is only relief after suffering :) Thank you so much for your kind comment!!! :)

[sette]

a good poem being compared to weather i love how the rain is described here. nicely written and expressed

[Nisha M.]

As always, I thank you for your kind review! It makes me want to write and share more here :)

[sette]

and do continue to write whatever you want and i am here to share a thought or two