Love In the rain.

Picturesque she looked in her dotted blue dress.
Waiting was I on our usual dating place.
Like from a fountain,Romance sprinkl'd from the heaven.
Me Romeo astounded as if my Juliet brought with her the rain.
Waiting was my patience and by lord it was sweeter too;
For priceless rewards were like- On a Queue.
The loyalty of her love that fascinated my heart.
The sweet fragrance of her,lull'd me like a venomous dart.
The breeze just nimbly threw her locks upon my face.
And finally the heart did touch the heart!And was it so amazed.
The time ran so fast and never did pause.
The dusk came up and finally she had to rush.
"Love In the rain is precious",me Romeo thought;
Walking towards the house,wishing everyday is that what I got.

Reviews

[LiberScriptus]

I think this poem is very well written, and you seem to have a real knack for using language to take the reader into the world you've set up here. I think the structure you have here really works and you show a great use of vocabulary and sentence structure. I also think it's of a great length, just long enough. Great job!

[Scytheriax]

I absolutely loved this poem. The diction and emotion were wonderful. The line breaks seem to really work with the poem as well. The image you painted is able to be seen vividly by the reader...Well done!

[LinBin]

A beautiful love poem, well versed x

[Violeta]

Unique, and romantic. You tell just enough to let us visualize the scene and then what is happening throughout it. Altogether very well put together.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Romantic and well written.

[JEWLDUST]

Love the imigery here. Very romanctc as well. Romance is always in my heart and mind.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very sweet scene.
Lovely verse.
Thanks for sharing

[HeIsWe]

This is really good, it had a great flow.

[KAREN]

Nicely done, great flow and imagery.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a gorgeous poem. Beautifully written. I feel the the romance come to life!!

[paradise]

awwhe this is beautiful i love it favourites :D