Into Cold Night

 

I went walking into cold night

In the forests dressed in white

Darkened tress their limbs laid bare

In the dusky winter air

Violet chorus it now sings

On the sound of distant wings

Above tree-tops and smoky stacks

From great red mansions and tiny shacks

Snow crunches sharply, all round my feet

Trudging down along frozen white street

Air crisp and clean, flows like a fountain

Dark snowy clouds loom over like mountain

Skies grow dim, purple and red

Sun slowly falls in snowy bed

All turns to blue, and silvery white

Breath now grows frozen on wintry night

On dispatch of errand I venture on

Just as last remnants of daylight now gone

Dark is the forest, cold is the night

No warmth or sunshine until morning’s light

Reviews

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I love the rhyming in this poem..it slows well and its not forced..you kind of forget it even rhymes because it just sounds natural..i loved it..I love the last 5 lines..the 'wintry night' is descriptive and pleasant..You did a great job of using descriptive wrods throughout the entire poem to draw the reader in..i cant anything more besides that i enjoyed the read...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next..Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Star-Runner]

This is just a wonderful write here, I like this.

[Aries]

I Love This....I could actually follow along on this journey, seeing everything as described .....Very well Written!