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Every time I look

Into page

Empty paper

No pen has touched it

I only see

 

 

Emptiness

 

 

 

 

In myself

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lau Thiam Kok]

this is rather a creative idea. It made me smile and laugh. Thank you.

[Rain]

I think we all have seen that empty paper, knowing there should be " something" inside to put on it. I know I have. Most people when they have writers block, have only to resort about having writers block. I write alot from personal experience so I merely go back over my life. This is agood piece. I likede the way you left the reader thinking it would be just an empty paper. Clever. Rain..

[Emily B]

The words are always there. Sometimes they just get scared and hide away. I don't know where they come from when they appear. It's always a little like magic.

I loved your poem. It made me think this morning.

[Star-Runner]

Know what you mean there, Like this for a minute you had me thinking I was staring at a blank piece of paper until I scrolled all the way down, Like this write.

[Anthony Garcia]

heh, nice! i really enjoyed this
i could totally vibe with your message
i feel that was as well with a piece of blank paper
the nothingness of it really bugs me
your twist, being introspective with it
was really enjoyable, nice twist