Phenomenal

Phenomenal

A Poem by James Takeo Panton

 

I want to throw you down
Upon soft cool sheets
Kiss your body
From head to feet
To stare longingly into
Your dreamy eyes
While holding you close
And with you now lie
The way that you smell
The way that you feel
All this now comes to me
It is so now real
Skin that I feel
Is fiery to touch
My desire now grows
Inside me so much
To gently caress
Your soft neck and ears
And whisper into them deeply
These words that now sear
Of desire and passion
And things I would do
Given this time now I have
Right now beside you
Lips would be gentle
Soft against breast
Against back, against shoulders
Against all of the rest
To slowly kiss and caress
Where paradise lies
That beautiful flower
That blooms between your thighs
My loins they now ache
To be in you deep
And in my firm grasp
Your flesh I would keep
And to be deep inside
And close and forever
And hold you down firmly
And let you go, never
It may seem so barbaric
It may seems lustful and wild
But I will assure you
It would not be mild
It is so phenomenal
These lusts that I entertain
But only with you
Again and again
And again
And again
And again
 
And when it is over
And we lie naked and sore
We will look into each others eyes
And then we would want more
Of this great love and great passion
Of this burning, deep flame
After the love that I have had with you
I am never the same
My words, they now ache me
My head filled with thoughts
Of passion and lust
That I have not forgot
These things I remember
These moments loving and tender
These moments of lusting
Of taking and surrender
I miss these intensely
These intimate times
These memories are not lost
These memories are mine
One day I shall have you
And we shall never refrain
From expressing this passion
Again and again
And again
And again
And again

© 2008 James Takeo Panton


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stimulating sensual piece. great write for only a starting writer. keep it up.

Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very stimulating - quite enticing and sensual - thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! A really passionate and hot write here, very well written, enjoyed this write bunches.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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James Takeo Panton
James Takeo Panton

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada, Canada



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I am a 38-year old amateur and have only recently started writing some stuff. I began putting down these words around November, 2007, and discovered that I enjoyed doing this, and now I am seeing w.. more..

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