Quicksand

Sometimes you get stuck, but that can be a good thing

I didn't fall in love with you.

I sunk.

I knew soon as I tried to move that I'd be stuck.

S**t out of luck

And head over heels.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the way your poem is so bluntly honest. I love how love isn't portrayed as being all wonderful & fluffy. Sometimes we are in proximity to another person for a long while & then one day we realize we can't live without him/her. Some people are cantankerous yet compatible *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Margie!

[mattavelli]

Hello, Fanicia! :)
This is a funny and beautiful expression of your love.
Thanks for sharing.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you for the kind words, and giving this a read!

[Laurierose]

Love this style of writing! I truly do enjoy when the poet packs limitless messages in small packages, and this one packs a whallop! Your writing is very relatable as well. Like I'm holding a mirror to myself. Great read.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you very much! If you can relate to what I write, then it makes me feel like I've done my job 😊

[T.S. Sky]

Short and sweet. Great emotions.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you T.S. Sky

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome. :)

[Lavi]

Fascinating how the rhyme scene works so well with such a short and blunt write. Never read anything worded quite like this. I liked it! :)

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Lavi! I'm glad I could show you something that's unique 😊

[Wild Rose]

That was us > We are still stuck

[Fanicia E.]

This review lo key confuses me lol who are you talking about?

[Wild Rose]

Me and her we hit it off together at first meeting

[Fanicia E.]

Aww, I'm glad