self-esteem

self-esteem

A Poem by Fang

when your self-esteem is gone
you lose yourself
you lose all emotion
you try to fight it
but it has a tight hold on you
so never lose emotion like I did
its not fun
no one will talk to you as much and you become 
something worse than an emotionless person

© 2013 Fang


Author's Note

Fang
i'm sad right now :(

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Don't be sad, we all have times when we fight with that darkness we're writers, its pretty much our curse that comes along with our gift. But each writer finds not only themselves and who they are but each person's unique style out of this fight with the mind. Keep your head up young one and don't forget that you are a writer and that is who you are, darkness will never go away u must keep fighting. Your poem was great :) I look forward to more of your work. And wipe your tears away wolf your stronger then that. Hope that helps.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fang

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. That helps me a lot. :)



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Sorry I havn't been around a while, I too am sad, my wordsmith brain had been keeping me awake at night so I turned it off and it took the huff and has permanently left to no avail and never returned, I lol by now and then and read some poems of friends hoping it might spark and ignite my poetry heart but as of yet nothing is being created in the imagination of my mind to help me write a Rhyme !

Posted 4 Years Ago


Fang

4 Years Ago

I understand, I haven't been around here for a long time due to writers block.
Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

It’s a blooming pain ... wish my brain would start blooming with words again!
Fang

4 Years Ago

I understand
Sissy no be sad....ever again remember I'll see chu soon!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't be sad, we all have times when we fight with that darkness we're writers, its pretty much our curse that comes along with our gift. But each writer finds not only themselves and who they are but each person's unique style out of this fight with the mind. Keep your head up young one and don't forget that you are a writer and that is who you are, darkness will never go away u must keep fighting. Your poem was great :) I look forward to more of your work. And wipe your tears away wolf your stronger then that. Hope that helps.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fang

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. That helps me a lot. :)

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Fang
Fang

Oak Hill, WV



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Hi, I am Fang. I am a story and poem writer, and I am one to make stories out of people's ideas that they suggest to me. I only have one rule for my stories and that is: I will not make stories about .. more..

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