Broken

the feeling of you,

the way you talked to me,

the way you looked at me,

it made me happy,

it made me feel loved,

yet,

those feelings,

those things,

don't matter,

didn't matter,

never mattered,

in the end,

you never loved me,

you never cared about me,

you broke me.

Author's Note

I'm 15 and want to become a writer! Please leave comments on what things I could change and become a better writer. Thank you!

Reviews

[MissMeNot]

Might try using descriptives to invoke the emotions about which you are writing. Otherwise its really good... I'm sorry for your heartache.

[Justina]

Thank you for the feedback, and its okay. I'm getting over it.