Let You Go...

pls click the link to read my poem :-)

http://icecreamandrainbows.blogspot.com/2014/02/let-you-go.html

Author's Note

the art of letting go......

Reviews

[Kenzi Griffin]

Beautiful! It shows that letting go of someone special, no matter what the pain they have caused you, it's still a struggle to do so. You are an amazing writer. GOOD JOB!

[N!LoC]

Thank u so much Kenzi... I hope I never stop posting on writerscafe... All the great feedback is really inspiring ;-)

[Shaquana Adams]

Your authors note makes me think of the poem "One Art" By Elizabeth Bishop. I think you'd like that poem, you should check it out. I really enjoyed the sense of self discovery and boldness in your poem.

can’t have a heart attack...
cuz i won’t be looking back...

And with the repetition, it really could be a song. Very nicely penned! :)

[N!LoC]

The art of letting go is actually A Mariah song that I had such anticipation to but turned out to be a boring song really... But the song title was enough to get me inspired to write my own "letting go" song lol

[KAOlmsted]

Hey, C...I'm going to devour your blog as soon as I have a spare minute (ha...and when might THAT be, kimmer?? *laugh*) This was a really great piece of self-discovery. Good on ya. xoxo

[N!LoC]

Thanks kimmy!!! I think you would be the first female to actually read my blog lol..

[KAOlmsted]

...and I'm only marginally gay xD My pleasure (stop calling me kimmy *laugh*) (actually, you know you and you alone are allowed to call me kimmy...but only you)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sometimes you just gotta let em go. Romance ain't for sissies

[N!LoC]

Yeah! Tell me like it is! Rico! Hahah

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a song...you let another one get away N!LoC?!

[N!LoC]

Another one? Lol oh Frieda..... My poems are usually inspired by one... But not for long.. Cuz I will let go ... Sooner or later... ;-)

[Frieda P]

That's what I'm saying haha you have to settle down N, have some kids, bake cupcakes ;-)

[N!LoC]

Bake cupcakes I can do .. Have some kids?? Ewwwwww I hate kids!! Lol ..

[Frieda P]

LOL at least you're honest..... ;-P