Be Gone...

pls click the link below to read my poem :-)

www.icecreamandrainbows.blogspot.com/2014/01/be-gone.html

Author's Note

a lil raw .... for my taste... but that was the bittersweet feelings that inspired me to write this one...

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Another sade song from you pen N!LoC, what do you mean 'a lil raw for my taste', you wrote it. ;-)

[N!LoC]

Thanks Frieda... I said that because I feel this is one of my more "write what I feel without sensoring" poems ... When i usually try to be a little vague .. Lol... It was like me telling that person exactly how I felt.. But just in a direct poetic rhyming way...

[N!LoC]

RAW .... (Giggle giggle)

[Frieda P]

You should never censor yourself N, be bold! ha RAWR!

[Kenzi Griffin]

My gods, could you relate any more to me?! Legit, I've finally decided to move on even though I love this guy with my whole heart but I need to move on due to the fact that all he does is cause me pain but in the process of doing this, I've also pushed him away as a friend and it kills me but if that's what it takes to move on, I have to do it right? But I'll never give up on someone I love, I'm always here for him but not as he sometimes wishes, yenno? But yah, amazing write, my dear friend. You're a beautiful writer who lets their feelings shine clearly through the simple words. Wonderful!

[N!LoC]

All I can say is Kenzi... Close the door... But leave it unlocked.... ;-)

[Kenzi Griffin]

Well... he came back. I'm with him now but i also hurt my best friend in the process..

[N!LoC]

Oh man... Write about it Kenzi... I'm sure that would get u some good inspiration out of it ... And then send me a read request and I'll read and know your story .. ;-)

[Kenzi Griffin]

Okay :) I'm about to add some new things, honestly. I haven't been on here much due to my eating disorder and self harm, but starting today I'm getting help.

[N!LoC]

Good for u!

[Shaquana Adams]

Raw poems are awesome and this one is no exception. Great job! :)

[N!LoC]

Oh my! A random reader !! Hi Shaq! Thanks for this lovely surprise!! (Giggle giggle)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

When one is raw, one side steps into the hazard of being, well done, great read.

[N!LoC]

HAHAHAHAH!!!!! What a punch line!! Thanks Thomas ! That really made me "lol"

[Baby Ricochet]

N!LoC My fine gay friend sometimes raw is good. It works for me

[N!LoC]

Thank u baby Rico! I can always count on you for your great comments ;-)