Say Goodbye...

Say Goodbye...

A Poem by N!LoC

I forgive

And forget

But it still hurts me this way


I just live

Never met

And won't wait for that day


Still take my love for granted

When it was all I ever wanted


Elusive

I bet

Say goodbye

I'll be okay

© 2013 N!LoC


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this can be taken in many different ways like a best friend leaving your life, a family member dying, etc...that is what I gather from it

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

Really? Well this was really directed very specifically ... Not to a friend or a family member that'.. read more
Wow I can so relate to this and, in not so many words, have felt like saying this so someone close to me :/
very well done :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

oh ... wow... thanks.. its always great when others can relate to my writing...
its great i looked in my read requests and teh name of this just captured me i ussally just dissmiss teh request for read but when i saw it was urse i just couldent resist!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

Yay that's great! Thanks !
Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

mmhhmm! :) welcome
Good attitude, but I bet it took you a while to get there, I really like this one N!

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

hahaha ... if only you knew how many times i got there ... again and again.. lol
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha you're not alone my friend!
This is amazing, completely up my alley. Ugh, it rings so true :/ splendid write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

i know right??? we seem to be in the same alley... well keep sending your read requests cuz im sure .. read more
Kenzi Griffin

11 Years Ago

I sure will!!
You'll love again, and again, and again. That's how it works

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

but not everybody can be so lucky in love.. but here to hoping ...
Wow
simplicity is awesome....and you proved it...with this splendid write.
Thanks for sharing this splendid write Thanks.

Posted 11 Years Ago


N!LoC

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Princess Penelope !! Lol
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

Its venelope...and Im still a glitch ...couldn't find my Ralph yet...lol

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Added on October 1, 2013
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Tags: gay, love, romance

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N!LoC
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I am someone who can't help but daydream all day long... and I find most of my inspiration from mainly just being an eternal child and a hopeless romantic wondering about that crazy little thing call.. more..

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