Yummy Asian Boys...

Japanese prince...

prince of my dream...

a dream so delicious...

like strawberry cream...

Filipino boy toy...

toy i like to play...

playing with u is yum!

yummy all night and day...

my Chinese nerd...

nerdy as i can see...

and i see oh sweet honey...

honey bumble bee...

my Thai cutie pie...

a pie i’d like to eat...

eat u up and swallow...

swallow 'oh' such a treat...

Author's Note

craving for the oriental flavours.... hmmmm

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Ha you're a bad bad boy N! Very cute little ditty...only you could get away with this one....

[N!LoC]

im a good boy.... with"bad" thoughts.... hihi

[K. Hicks]

I agree with Jonathan its sweet and dirty I love your work this made me laugh My sister would love it!

[N!LoC]

:-) x .......10

[Jonathan Biswell]

for some reason reading your stuff puts a smile on my face your stuff is sweet yet dirty at the same time

[N!LoC]

hihi.... mostly sweet... definately :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

N!LoC!! It's great to see you again! I've missed you. A cute poem about cute boys. Nicely done my friend.

[N!LoC]

Yes baby Rico! I've missed u 2 ! I've been having trouble for weeks sending read requests but today it's finally working again ... I've got lots of catching up to do with all your read requests too ! Hihi

[Decanter Red]

Ok...so the title is very interesting...

The poem is equally interesting, however, as reviewing from technicality, it certainly needs a major repairing. The first paragraph is fine, but the consecutive ones has punctuation and grammatical problems? It doesn't seem smooth and rather much like 'broken english' if you get my drift.

But again, this poem seem to be written for your personal fantasy and pleasure instead of development of your skills, so how can I judge? Hahaha...

One personal question however, if your profile picture is you and you wrote this poem, does this means you..umm...like boys? No offense LOL.

[N!LoC]

I'll admit it honestly.... This is not one of my finest ... But I wrote it and just wanted to post it anyways... Lol .... And yes ... Like DUH??? I really do like boys ... Guys... Men ... Anything of that nature lol

[Decanter Red]

Indeed, it's one of the most daring titles I have come across my reviewing 'career' LOL, even more daring than the ones eho are meant for adults hahaha! Where are you from, by the way, if I were to judge by your profile picture...

[N!LoC]

im from all the way in asia...
do u want me to be more specific? lol

[Decanter Red]

Ahh, I see. Don't worry, I think I have a pretty good idea already. ;)