Monday Blues...

i hear my phone “ding” then my heart races...

knowing I just got a text from you...

a casual hi! or a warm hello...

are just some of the simple things that you do...

we go back and forth then flirt and play...

have a few laughs and jokes along the way...

but just a moment of fun catching up with you...

is enough to kiss away my monday blues... 

Author's Note

it's always nice to get a text from someone... :-)

Reviews

[Moxx XD]

I don't know why, but this makes me really happy :)

[KAOlmsted]

Communication from a certain someone, in any form, is enough to turn an otherwise yucky day into something special...I've been there, only in my day (*laugh* what?? In my day??? xD) anyway, back when I was a teenager, it used to be a letter left on my screen door...every morning, a new letter in answer to the one I left for him the night before...it wasn't nearly as creepy as it sounds xD Excellent write. Butterflies in the stomach ;-)

[N!LoC]

in some ways... im just so grateful for technology.. because that connection is only just a "skype", "text", or "internet voice call" away... :-)

[KAOlmsted]

The anticipation remains, though, which is half the fun ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

This piece has a wonderful childlike charm to it I couldn't help but love. Outstanding work N!LoC

[N!LoC]

"childlike" is my middle name baby... lol (and "sweet" is my maiden) hihi

[Baby Ricochet]

HA!

[Anita Harris]

So sweet! Love this :)

[N!LoC]

yup! i am proud to say i am a sweet SWEET kinda guy... (when i want to be) lol

[Trigorin]

Very nice piece, and the simplicity of the topic really works for you, I think. I question some of your formatting choices, as they make the piece look a little too lazy, but that's a minor issue. Well done.

[N!LoC]

Lol ok I admit.. I don't bust my brains to perfect the exact word flow or even rhymes .. Because I don't want my pieces to be over thought out or edited :-)

[Frieda P]

Isn't it amazing that in this day and age, a text is all it takes to float our boat...ha, what happened to reaching out and touching someone...just made me think what we settle for in life....good one nonetheless.

[N!LoC]

boo hoo... i know... a "touch" can never ever replace the feeling of a "text".. but just imagine all those people who are in online relationships.. sad eh.. :-(

[Frieda P]

My point exactly, seems so sad, but I guess that's the world we live in today...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a smile...a moment that brings it.

[N!LoC]

oh.. that would be a "snap" moment... lol (snap = snap a pic and send) :-)