Where I'll Be...

 i cross my fingers hoping there will come a day...

a day when you finally get the chance to feel  my touch...

and even though it’s only just a simple flight away...

the weight that rests on your shoulders sometimes seem all too much...

your golden heart has truly proved so far & beyond...

to put the needs of others first way before your very own...

 i can understand the guilt of where you’re coming from...

then again who on earth would ever want to be left alone ?

i’m staying positive that things will somehow all work out...

because just meeting you would mean the world to me...

but through it all, i don’t have any shadow of a doubt...

come spring time this year, in your arms... is where i'll be...

Author's Note

your reviews will be very much appreciated...i also would really like to know your interpretation of this ... oh and don't forget to click the link on the word "touch" which will lead you to my blog :-)

Reviews

[Anita Harris]

I really enjoyed your poem! I feel as if everything flows wonderfully and has such deep meaning. I can tell your words come from the heart in this. Very nice job! :)

[N!LoC]

yes anita!... everything you just said is really what i felt... it really has a deep meaning for me and most definitely comes straight from my heart with complete honesty :-)

[KAOlmsted]

I like this a lot. I hope he realizes how special he is, and how much he means to you. Spring time is a great time for budding romance. Then again, any time of year is a good time of year to get laid ;-) *laugh* Really good stuff. And thanks for the link to the blog; I haven't checked it out yet, but I will.

-kimmer

[N!LoC]

whoa! who said anything about getting laid???? (blush blush) ...well to be honest... when u travel half way round the globe to meet up after all this time... you definitely want to make the most out of it... (blush blush)

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[The Dreamer]

i dont know why , but this line got my attention:
and even though it’s only just a simple flight away...
a simple flight away - 'flight' shows how far away you are from the person you love , yet you call it 'simple'! long distance relationships are never easy , it needs courage, patience and trust above all. from your poem it is clear that you have all of it in you.love makes the impossible, possible :)

[N!LoC]

ahhh... you are soo insightful ! i know right? it really is just a simple flight away... but its not like you can just pack up and hop on the plane tomorrow... its sounds simple though :-)

[Nikki Hughes]

Beautiful and very inspiring. Keep up the good work! This poem describes a long distance relationship and I think you could just put more raw emotion into it to make it better.

[Nikki Hughes]

Otherwise it would be great. I would have no issues with it then.

[N!LoC]

yes... i have to admit.. sometimes.. i do hold back abit... i don't know for whatever reason !... it's just that i try to be a little vague sometimes... and try to keep it open ended... even though i know its coming from such a "direct" place...

[GlacialStars]

Woah this is cool. I really like the hopeful and patient vibes in this poem even though your away you still hope...no you know that one day you guys will meet and that's an really strong feeling I once felt so I can relate to this. Good job!

[N!LoC]

thanks glacial *'s.. (nice name by the way).... that's the hope.. and that's the dream... i always stay hope full... even though i get discouraged very easily now and then :-)

[GlacialStars]

Its only normal to get discouraged but the important thing is to get back up after you've fallen. And thanks (I like the name too) keep the hope up :-)

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

I'm loving the structure of this, so carefree, flowing and free. The ellipsis gives it a kind of dreamy feel. Interesting write my good man.

[N!LoC]

oh wow.. i just leaned a new word today... "ellipsis" lol.... yes... with this poem .. i trying to be vague but i went dead on ahead care free anyway

[KeeD]

I love poems about long distance relationships or a poem about the desire of new love. I love the way you linked your blog through this piece, pretty cool :D Great job bro, hope it all works out for you and wish you the most amazing 2013 :)
Keep sending me read requests, I love your work and i'll always be a devout reader.

[N!LoC]

Wishing u the same Keegan ... And like wise with your own read requests !