A GIRL I KNOW!!!

You changed my world with a blink of an eye 

That is something that I can not deny 

You put my soul from worst to best 

That is why I treasure you my dearest Marites

You just don't know what you have done for me 

You even pushed me to the best that I can be 

You really are an angel sent from above 

To take care of me and shower with love

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear

But hate you as a fear,

And your touch have chased away all of my fear 

You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile

 

It is even better everytime you smile

It so magical those things you've made 

To make use of me every now and then,

To bring back my faith that almost fade 

Now my life is a dream come true 

It all began when I was loved you

Now I have found what I am looking for 

It's you and your love and nothing more 

Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment 

That nothing for you just a playing game

In my life something I've never felt

I wish I could talk 'til the end of day 

I am your friend and will be there,

But never say that you are not there.

I am doing things for the betterment of your's

But you seems to be in other world.

But now I'm running out of things to say 

So I'll end by the line that my heart say

"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show

Give my love a respect 

That's what I merely say!!!

Reviews

[BlackCl0ud]

Excellent write. Your feelings for the matter are extremely present but leaves just enough room for the reader to fit their own in. ~ BlackCl0ud

[Cherrie Palmer]

the heart is an endless treasure and this was delightful