BE WHAT YOU ARE!!!

its a general thing what people do when they want to attract himself/herself infront of others.... and i have also experienced the same thing in my life!!!!!!!!!!! and this way i am ending my feelin.

are you man  of words 

or a man full of fake jam

changing yourself day by day

thinkin n thinkin of all fakes

living for the sake of others

and not for urself

by changing urself 

day by day

cheating and makin urself fool

ur livin ur life

deprivin others of the life 

you have to live

you have much to give

by being urself

than walkin along to someone's own shoes.......

try to live the life of urs 

than being others....

its nothin more than a fake....

be yourself and shine out by ur qualities...

as god is their and always be 

when u will be the one 

family and friend will their 

if you spent practicin just being you!!!!!!

as be the one what you are!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Dr. Robert]

I'm not a big fan of reviewing poetry since each poem means something different from one person to the next. My biggest gripe was the lack of emotion in this piece. The emotion is there but it seems a little too caught up with simple words and such. What I recommend is really letting out your vocabulary. To me, poetry is about conveying that emotion with your words, more so than a story and such. Dont be afraid to really dig into what you're feeling and push it out. Use your surrounds to help you convey that meaning. Compare those feelings with the things around you. Remember that and you will go far! Keep up the good work.

[Nilesh Ratnam]

thank you sir!!!
but i am a beginner and most probably it will gonna take some time...
i'll do that sir.. surely!!!!!!