Something Beyond Friendship

Something Beyond Friendship

A Poem by Nilesh Ratnam

baby i'll never know,
why i call you everytime,
why i tease you everytime,
i asked god and pray
that you be good everytime...

in the mist of winters
you told me something
i don't know,why!!!
i can't tell you something,
as if i buried it
 in my heart and soul!!!!

life is long and time is less
teen ages will go 
but you will come to know!!!!

what's the matter 
And who is the soul!!!!

i can't tell you how proud i really am;
to have you here in this age of my life,
my darling my love
now you are my shining star....

for the short years we are together,but
i'll be their forever...
laughing, thinking and missing you forever...

honey it wasn't wrong
to tell me those lines...
you have the right to say that anytime..
and i thought about it whole night

baby girl i love you ssssooooo.....
that's what i really want you to know,
every time you are their in my mind.

you will never see 
just what you mean to me!!
for this i'll carry you 
until my dying day....

where you will greet me
on that joyous day!!!!

baby honey you will never know,
 how much i love you so, come to,
in my heart is where you will stay,
until you meet me till my last breath!!!!!

chubby checks, your are such a sweetheart.........!! 

© 2011 Nilesh Ratnam


Author's Note

Nilesh Ratnam
its for friendship b/w me and my sweet friend!!!!!!

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A great tribute to a friend for sure. I like the heartfelt,cry out you make in this poem. I was very fond of this line:"until you meet me till my last breath" I really enjoyed this piece. Good job!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one!!! The emotion reflects here nicely. Overwhelming love and affection. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet and innocent. I think we must all become like little children when we love. We need to love like we've never been hurt before!

Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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