September 15, 2016

September 15, 2016

A Poem by Nikki Monserrate
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A time when I am totally broken...and all I can do is love someone, from afar

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I caught you looking at me
You caught me looking at you
We were looking at each other simultaneously
For a moment there, I really felt I missed you

© 2016 Nikki Monserrate


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Simple and elegant style. You conveyed the feelings beautifully.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nikki Monserrate

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, YumnaKay! :)
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Nikki ☺
Very lovely! You expressed such emotion in such a simple way... Great job! Keep up the good work, God bless.....

~Tori...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nikki Monserrate

8 Years Ago

Nawwww. Thank you, Tori!
Tori Jones

8 Years Ago

You're most definitely welcome...

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Added on October 24, 2016
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Nikki Monserrate
Nikki Monserrate

Manila, Philippines



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Hi I’m Nikki…and I love mermaids. I feel like I’m one! :) I want to see the whole world unravel in front of my very own eyes, step foot on every soil, meet awesome people, explor.. more..

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