Corridors

this is my first piece of writing for this site and I hope i come up to the standards. It is about the trials that one has to face in life to emerge successful...

I turn a corridor,yet again I see,

another corridor waiting for me.

For as long as I can remember, it has been this way,

almost as if the corridors are begging me to stay.

But I know that's not true.

They say corridors are tools,

to help you in the "life" that you pursue.

Even then at the end of the day 

needless to say,

this "life" is yet to be found

have still not made my presence count,

have not built my niche

am still struggling in every way.

Still have to find the key to the door,

I might own someday.

Sometimes when the corridors get cold,

I yearn for some luck.

It seems hard to believe that my turn'll ever show up.

But it is only me who writes my fate

so this much i'll say;

It is never too late

to build the key 

to the door that'll set you free.

so when I find that fabled door maybe, then I'll realize...

that corridors?

they're just the mind's game.

that's when they'll start to fray,

And it's only then truly that my old companions will beg me to stay.

Author's Note

DO give your comments! i am a hundred percent receptive to whatever i can do to get better... but it is the first time I'm writing here so please be kind if you have criticisms...
I hope it is not terrible and that you like it and maybe even connect to it in some form...

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Very wise you are. Splendid read and write.

[nikita]

Thanks for taking the time out to read and review! Means a lot!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

My pleasure, Nikita

[Akshat♥]

I really like your way of writing poetry :)
It speaks so much ...
Different topic to write about :)
Beautifully written..Keep writing!!

[nikita]

Wow thank you for reviewing my work! I have read much of your work and it is truly very nice of you to take the time out and review!

[Akshat♥]

You are welcome:)