never loved me

Probably the earliest work I can find in English, around the age of 14.

The rain is falling heavily on me 

And I can still hear you saying… goodbye

We swore an oath of eternal love

But you couldn’t live by your word… you lie

And I still feel  your lips on mine

But even with all those kisses… I cry

And now I’m gone without any hope

Of coming back to your arms… I thrive

Reviews

[Karmee]

WOW!! so very emotional, I like your flow and rhyme scheme

[Nihil]

Thanks. It is probably the earliest work in English that I can find, so excuse any mistakes.