paranoid

I'm gonna probally make a series of poems with the topic of paranoid

 I'm paranoid

by your love

to fill this void

I shove

a plastic heart

into the space

I'm paranoid

by your face

and the way you act

I'm paranoid

you'll erase

me from your lips

I'm paranoid

that this ship

will sink down the drain

I'm paranoid

your love,

will never replace that old pain

your Iv drips 

into my veins

I'm paranoid 

my heart

will skip a beat

and fall into the rain

soaked in it's 

paranoid defeat

but then i realize

sometimes being paranoid

is sometimes just being insane

Author's Note

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Reviews

[me]

I really like this, and I relate to it. Past realationships leave such a mark and can affect current relationships, and sometimes we get carried away by our weirdness and how we feel. I like how the words I'm paranoid are thrown in randomly to reiterate the theme of the poem. mave sure that we know that IV is IV, cause for a second I thought you'd misspelled love. Fabulous job...

[Lynx]

I like how it started, and how most of the poem went. But to me, the last lines destroyed the whole meaning from it. Like, mentioning it in plain view about how it's just insanity. Hehe, xD.

Anyway, that's just my opinion, but I really like the poem overall.

[Fear Corrupts!]

Hmm,
this is good; great flow.
I'm sure that a lot of people can relate to this.

[ Fear Corrupts! ]