A bad joke chapter one: where the monsters live

A bad joke chapter one: where the monsters live

A Chapter by nightmask
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u'll find out it's good I promise :)

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        My name is Iocus Damien Read, I’m not allowed to eat anything normal. I tried it once and I got really sick, so I have to eat special food my mom makes for me everyday. In this world everyone looks like a model, no one seems to age and I feel like an outsider, because I’m no model. I’m kind of short and I’m way too skinny. I have my books to keep me company though, my vampire books.

        I’m a sophomore in high school and I’m 15. My father Cassius is a doctor, my mom Duana is a poet. All our names mean something, my father’s means hollow like his dark onyx eyes. My mom’s means “dark little maiden.” And mine means “Joke” because it’s funny how I’m here.

 



© 2008 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
hope u like :) please leave a review and this is just a preview I have at least 7 pages so far in my notebook the picture is what Iocus looks like

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Sounds interesting. I will have to keep up with this book.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will go take a look
sounds intersting

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what?

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Interesting...
Looks more like a teaser than a chapter.
Hope you post more!

(I'd like to see more description. I know you posted the image of Iocus, but it's always much better to show the story in words and imagery, rather than to just tell it.)

Best of luck! ^-^

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 23, 2008
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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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