I am
A Poem by
nightmask
read just the "I am" lines first then read only the lines after "I am" it sounds cool then read it as one :)
I am the crow
of your death
I am the raven
of your show
I am the dealer
of your meth
I am the craven
you’ll never know
I am the haven
from inside
I am the other
to which you lied
I am the cover
of your mask
I am mistaken
you are last
I am the eyes
on your throat
I am the lines
that you quote
I am the sun
when you rise
I am the one
who hears your cries?
© 2008 nightmask
Author's Note
hope u like :)
Reviews
i did like this. and i like the flow and the rhyming as well
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
AWESOME! This is going in my faves
You have an amzing talent
And are very creative
I'd pick out my favorite line
But I like them all
This is well written.
Posted 15 Years Ago
AWESOME! This is going in my faves
You have an amzing talent
And are very creative
I'd pick out my favorite line
But I like them all
This is well written.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Damn I must say kinda dark but very well versed... sounds like someone's conscience talking to them.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Damn I must say kinda dark but very well versed... sounds like someone's conscience talking to them.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Simple, efficient, dark, intense, interesting, and compatible with anyone who has ADD.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Simple, efficient, dark, intense, interesting, and compatible with anyone who has ADD.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 18, 2008
Last Updated on December 18, 2008
Author
nightmask
About
i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean..
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