I am

I am

A Poem by nightmask
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read just the "I am" lines first then read only the lines after "I am" it sounds cool then read it as one :)

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I am the crow

of your death

I am the raven

of your show

I am the dealer

of your meth

I am the craven

you’ll never know

I am the haven

from inside

I am the other

 to which you lied

I am the cover

of your mask

I am mistaken 

you are last

I am the eyes

on your throat

I am the lines 

that you quote

I am the sun

when you rise

I am the one

who hears your cries?

© 2008 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
hope u like :)

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i did like this. and i like the flow and the rhyming as well

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWESOME! This is going in my faves
You have an amzing talent
And are very creative
I'd pick out my favorite line
But I like them all
This is well written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn I must say kinda dark but very well versed... sounds like someone's conscience talking to them.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simple, efficient, dark, intense, interesting, and compatible with anyone who has ADD.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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