The cure

The cure

A Poem by nightmask
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IDK what it's about but it's random hope u like :) (and their just making out and he ends up hurting her that's it ,it's nothing dirty)

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 The cure           in the phone book   

Is for sure         of your enemies   

Impurist of night     from the light

a kiss                emitts only so many remedies

from your lips        are going to have to try tonight

that drips down her tights    hooked into your words

ripped from hystericalflights      connecting like wires

go fly a kite      onto birds

for her pleasure       the gun fires

never you delight       blood spills like herds

cracking her ribs as you trail      your fingers down her hips

you knew you were right         down to the feet

but you insisted      her heart to fail

on lying to yourself      about missing her heart beat

and being twisted     is not missed in jail

and now she’s listed      as the cure for the elite

© 2008 nightmask


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nightmask
hope u like it :]

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I found it a bit disjointed, I guess my brain has been conditioned to read one way. I read it column down then column up then skipped back and forth and put the story together. I don't know if you planned it that way but it worked for me. So you get a+ plus for creating a new style even if its unintentional. A tragic love story.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I found it a bit disjointed, I guess my brain has been conditioned to read one way. I read it column down then column up then skipped back and forth and put the story together. I don't know if you planned it that way but it worked for me. So you get a+ plus for creating a new style even if its unintentional. A tragic love story.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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