to be or not to be faithful

I came up with it after watching changeling IDK why but the movie inspired me to write it but nothing connects lol

 upon the broken willow tree

there is a sad soft lifting melody

as the red and brown leaves shake free I wonder does he dare

to wait for me?

will his mind ponder?

as I wander

will his love be ever changing?

As I walk around the broken bridge

will he think to be enganing with others?

The way to man’s heart is through the fridge

but the question is will he be faithful?

belong to me?

will he be able?

his eyes dropping my heart like tears

his heart forsaking me

like leaves from maple trees in autum

will he be there when I come back?

will his gaze on me sink to the bottom

and back up to someone else?

please release me from my wracking fears

please tell me what I lack

To be or not to be

faithful is the quest

in this sort fable

Author's Note

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[me]

You are right nothing does connect. But if you ever stop and listen to your thoughts, they really don't connect either. If I gather correctly, this woman is concerned that her man is faithful. Trust me, we all wonder that all fo the time. Women are always concerned that they will be number one to their man. It our deepest seated fear. I like the disjointedness of it, but I think that there are a couple of lines that either need to be re-written for the flow or removed for it. Does that make any sense? But it is random, as are her thoughts....

[just is]

I think this is wonderful,
You did a wonderful job.