Hello hollowness

to my distant friends

 Hello hollowness

Hello, hello

hollowness

hello,hello

emptiness

my heart is evanescence

it can be effaced in an instant

Hello,hello

hollowness

hello,hello

emptiness

will you even notice my dissaperance?

No you won’t you’ve become so distant

Hello,hello

hollowness

hello,hello

emptiness

was it something I said? something you read?

was it something you did? was it the way I bled?

did it scare you? that lushious color seeping down my torn ligaments?

my blood vessels creeping out to say

hello,hello 

hollowness

hello,hello

emptiness

The piano keys banging an angry tune 

the notes floating from your pen.

My soul in ruin

I swear the storm with come soon

followed by the rain creeping down my eye lashes.

As I run in terror 

to your 

window 

before you 

close it off 

from the world

and I scream at 

you

I just wanted to say

“HELLO HELLO

I MISS YOU SO

THE HOLLOWNESS

THE EMPTINESS 

AND YOUR 

DISSAPERANCE 

IN MY LIFE”

Author's Note

hope u like

Reviews

[Chaos Stone]

you back your work up, right? its not ONLY here, is it?
because you should put this in a word processor and spell check, hehe
i also recommend this because having a good thesaurus just a click away really helps me
can find new descriptives, etc
as for the work itsself, *ahem* very emo
no offence
some good metaphors though, like 'The piano keys banging out an angry tune'