Broken Wings

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       Broken Wings

I was never meant to posses wings

 

That’s why they now lye rotting on my back

 

I didn’t earn them I had to request these things

 

I have no more feathers to lift me off my useless feet

 

along my  spine there are bones that at times love to crack

 

and turn to ash sliding to my toes like sand in a glass

 

I’m paralyzed in my bone marrow and shriveled heart beat

 

In my dreams I jolt awake I wait in agony for the pain to pass

 

My wings burn off a little more again every night is the same.

 

Hellp is the thing I need and it’s what I lack

 

But I’ve become used to the pain revolving in my head

swirling deep down into my rib cage covered by human meat

 

Inside I know I’m dead , but that can’t stop me from being led  

 

into this stories sweet lore 

 

of lovley tune my corpse shall be 

 

nevermore 

transfixed 

 

by the enchanted sound. 

 

I rip the the 

 

music sheets apart till my hands are red 

 

with murder of the 

 

words that tried to posses me 

I feel pity but 

never 

any 

dread.

So don’t risk your life or your wings.

 

Never try to test me

 

and my anger 

for I shall be forever more one of the undead

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chaos Stone]

first parts good, and the rhyming is kept low, except toward the end, and the imagery suffers because of it

overall i liked it

[Aileen]

i do like it. vrry nice. good work
ur friend
Aileen