tooth brush

tooth brush

A Poem by nightmask
"

another poem I was challenged to make a scary poem about this subject.

"

 BRUSH YOUR TEETH

my mother always said to do when I was little

WHY?

I always asked

DO IT OR I'LL GET DAD

she always threatened

MY QUESTION

was never answered

ONE DAY I WENT ON A SLEEPOVER

then my friend's mom said

BRUSH YOUR TEETH

I was scared to ask why

BECAUSE HER HUSBAND WAS IN JAIL

would he come after me if I didn't?

I BRUSHED MY TEETH IMMEDIATELY

the next day I went home

MY MOTHER ASKED ME

did you brush your teeth?

I NODDED

I would brush my teeth everyday

ONE DAY I BRUSHED TOO HARD

my gums began to bleed

MY DENTIST

said to not brush just for tonight to let my gums heal

THAT NIGHT

I walked in to the bathroom

I PICKED UP MY TOOTH BRUSH

I don't need to brush tonight

MY MIND SAID

I put my tooth brush down

MY HAND BEGAN TO SHAKE

my teeth began to ache

I TRIED TO CONVINCE MY SELF MY TEETH WERE FINE FOR TONGIHT

so i looked in the mirror and smiled

I STAGGERED BACK AND ALMOST SCREAMED

my teeth had white stuff on it and they were turning yellow

I GRABBED MY TOOTH BRUSH

as my mind began to bellow

BRUSH YOUR TEETH!

I unscrewed the cap of tooth paste 

I SQUIRTED IT ALL ON TO THE BRUSH AND FEROCIOUSLY 

I brushed my teeth till they al were sore and bleeding

I KEPT BRUSHING AND BRUSHING 

till I spat blood

I MORE SQUIRTED TOOTHPASTE INTO MY MOUTH 

I need to be clean!

I SWALLOWED THE CLUMP OF TOOTHPASTE LODGED IN MY THROAT

my throat was cold due to the mint in the paste

I TURNED OVER THE TUBE 

it read 

WARNING: IF SWALLOWED CONTACT THE POISIN CONTROL RRIGHT AWAY

-FIN-

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
if u want to make a scary or funny story or poem on toothpaste and send it to me :)

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A very twisted tale about toothpaste! There is more you can do to toothpaste you know............ >:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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