my crazy poetry

I was bored in the car so I wrote this lol don't make fun of me!!!!!

 

dreamers of the dead world come forth to meet me die along my path come forth come forth come to kill me battle each other with stories and tears come my dreamers come and live threw all of these years deset me hate me kill me join me and in death i will release you no one can say you were warened and if I am dreaming do wake me up and if i am awake bring me to the endless dream land of death come none and all push me and watch me fall come forth come forth and steal my key open my heart to my secrets of life and death come now my children do not be shy come with guilt on your eyes and innocence in your faces come with swords guns and spears and surrender to your nightmares and look in my magic mirror and see your selves for what you really are MONSTERS AN DREAMERS REAPERS AND FIENDS that is what you really are and you can not ever change it, it is your fault don't blame it on me blame it on the wind because on the wind fiery words are carried and are changed to wrong doings you are what you are DEAL WITH IT and take the good with the bad. and watch me fall again

Author's Note

there might be bad grammar (too lazy to check)

Reviews

[Kyle]

written with an iorn fist, i sense a little 17th century thing going on here, also entwined with a more modern perspective of life. great job, great details, keep it up!!