Icy fingers, Icy veins (I'm scared)

Icy fingers, Icy veins (I'm scared)

A Story by nightmask
"

"I don't know what happened or what it is"

"

 I was sitting in my room typing away mindless on my laptop lying on the carpet my mother had picked for me and which I detested. We had just gotten back from the beach and everyone went to their own rooms exhausted. I reached up to the table in front of me (since I was on the ground) and lifted my drink to my lips and took few sips of it , because it could not refresh me it had too much sodium. I set it down again with the cap unscrewed and went back to typing and laying on my stomach with my phone next to me and my headphones laying on random on the cover of my bed sheets. I kept trying to reload a specific page on a website which was simply not cooperating with me so I sighed and clicked on my phone to see if my friend had texted me back. Then it happened.....................

My hand was very relaxed

                                     or comfortabley numb,

and yet aware of what was going on

                                     I felt a tingling sensation near my knuckles

I could sense all the veins in my hand now pumping blood

                                      but the blood was not warm

It felt like shards of  microscopic cylinder glaciers 

                             moving slowly like built up traffic gliding through the tubes in my hand called veins

It felt like a ghost with icy fingers was softly caressing my hand 

                                       I blew hot breath on my hand and rubbed it but it refused to leave me

i shook it feverishly and frightened it remained stubborn 

                                      so finally I gave up and watched my handed and waited for this ice to thaw

Finally it did and so did my fear but never my curiosity to who and what that was

© 2008 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
I might have spelled some things wrong sorry!

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s**t! it happened again just now!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm taking this as a true story?
If not, it's very well written, because it seems so real.
Other than that, I really liked it.
The allignment of the font towards the end was very creative.
Keep up the good work.
Rion

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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