Black Hole Project 13 Saga: Book One- Beginnings
A Book by Locke Redwyne (night sys)
 A story we wrote off a whim last year. In dire need of editing and a whole remodel of the plot and pacing. By Peregrinator7, Jay, and myself.  © 2018 Locke Redwyne (night sys)
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We are still in the process of editing this, as we wrote it really quickly, and didn't really worry about how it sounded, just that our ideas were down on virtual paper
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....And we didn't worry about the horrible plot holes and really bad pacing that kinda just dropped on it like a nuke.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
yeah...
could you go through and post edits on your characters' povs? it's ok if you want me .. read moreyeah...
could you go through and post edits on your characters' povs? it's ok if you want me to change large chunks to make it good
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6 Years Ago
at some point yeah
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6 Years Ago
ok good thanks
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Added on April 17, 2018
Last Updated on April 18, 2018
Tags: #black hole, #science, #sci fi, #black hole project 13, #superpowers, #mars, #earth, #venus, #future, #book series, #13
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Wow, we haven't used this account in literal years! DID system of 19, idk if we'll be posting here but. I'm so glad to find this archive of our old writing. more..
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