Peace in your hell

Here I am in a beautiful dress 
About to hug you the human I miss
The one girl who I’d give my world to
The one girl who everything for her I’d do
Gazing into chocolate in your eyes 
Trying to express my love to you without lies 
Trying so hard yet I fail again 
And this failure kills me like acid rain
It’s strange how heaven turns to hell so fast 
You were closer than air to me but that didn’t last
And I accept being your little toy 
Play me love me for awhile then throw me for joy
And my pride I’d sell if it’s for your sake
For my days my years and my life you make
Even when you became a stranger I hardly try to recognize 
Or maybe it’s me but this pain grows worst and you won’t realize 
So for you I would want to be a fly
To follow you wherever you go before I die
And I know you are happy just the way you are
Steps away from me yet you are far
And I know it wouldn’t matter if I’m here around you or not
But I love you more than anything even more and allot
Yet there are few words not to be spoken so my emotions I hide 
So peace in this hell I try to find

I love you and happy birthday my sweet pain :')

Reviews

[Confuser]

Well, I loved it, the pouring out of love, the sacrifice, the marty, Steps away from me yet you are so far, oh we bleeding hearts. Great writing. Thank you so much.

[Salem]

Another great piece ...........

[Malcolmveli]

Just a beautiful poem. I like the style and just the way the words are communicate. U have a delivery that captures my attention and keeps me interested "And my pride I’d sell if it’s for your sake" definitely my favorite line in this poem. "Sweet Pain" being my close second.

[Yasmin]

Well This had a lot of honest emotions and I tried hard to express them right and I'm happy to know that I did well
Thanks for reading

[symmetryAsymmetry]

I love the way your poems find their way and come to a brilliant climax. You have a natural flare for writing. Very honest, very good.
PS- try to get the punctuations right... otherwise it hinders the reader...unless you write only for yourself and don't really care about impressing the reader, which is fine.

[elastagirl]

ahhh unrequited love. It stings.. well expressed and very heart felt.

[rnuff]

Wow quite intriguing and powerful, really enjoyed this write. awesome

[M.Kilani]

I love the honesty in this one !! yeah it is true that we sometimes feel this way about someone close, it's like you love them more but they slip away, but that is what life is about, people we meet and other we depart, no one stays forever, even if you love them more, you can't stop them from moving on.
Great one dear !!

[howlfjdks]

The Birthday of a love you lost is one of the most painful days to go through.
"And my pride..." my favorite line. I have sold my pride for a love trading it in for the deepest humiliation I have ever known.