Special as you are

I wrote this for my sister on her birthday :)

Smiling from the sky above

He glances down to see

The amazing lady I know and love

The amazing lady you will always be

 

It is his kingdom it is his time but not tonight

Tonight is special not just shadows silence and stars

A star fell from heaven above to give earth light

Bringing happiness joy and smiles

 

Bowing on his knee he proposes a rose

He is the moon but it is traditions and laws

Roses do represent love but when a star is born

They represent happiness as it’s a celebration till after dawn

 

Beautiful innocent and sweet

You wake up to this world as it’s under your feet

Your wishes are my commands and I am your slave

Order me my queen and your orders I shall always serve

 

Yes, tonight is like no other indeed

You were born you angel you were born to lead

To shine up lives and give hope for the needs

And to plant joy and faith’s seeds

 

I can write you all sort of words but words do no good

If I could show you what you mean to me I would

You are a bless from God and I’m lucky to have you

I love you my dear as you have no clue

 

I wish I was air to travel around the world

To see you on this special day

And kiss your cheek to wish

And wish you a happy birthday

 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a sweet poem...this really read well for me. I sense the emotion here, and during the reading, i found myself smiling and leaning closer to the screen. My only issue, and it is a minor one, is the punctuation that is missing in places. I'm not a fan of the period or end of line punctuation unless absolutely necessary, but there are places where you need commas within the lines...example "Tonight is special (,) not just shadows (,) silence and stars"--I'd go without punctuation at the end of the lines, but add it in when necessary within. Just me being picky...as I said, though, this was beautifully emotional! :)

[beautiful dreamer]

what a sweet poem for your sister! i am sure she loved it!

[redflutterby]

There is a special bond between sisters although sometimes there is competition too. Your love for her shines in this. Very pretty!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

OMG she is so lucky to have you as her sister :)
its so honest and emotional ..

[Yasmin]

thanks :)
Honestly I am lucky to have her :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Allah y5lekom la b3ad ya rab ameen

[Yasmin]

ameen :)

Goosebumps,

I never had a sister nor a brother, so I'm a happy lonely child,
But I felt the devotion, and love through every word, how it must be felt~
I think your sister is most proud of you after reading this,
So so lovely, and sweet. Thanks for sharing Yasmin.

E.L.

[howlfjdks]

Precious and illuminating.

[Rose]

:)