irrational hunt

Nothing to describe only a get away of a broken tango

A will to write is not fully satisfied
Feelings are present still but words shattered down
Noises that is peace now, the aggressive thoughts that feed my brain
A fall out of reality, a phantom that shreds dreams away
Mortality is the light and so mortality is never close or real
Abusing time breaking, the melody of my name
And it runs away, the smile that squeezes colours
As demons enjoy victory preforming a folklore of joy
No more sighs to smoke, the horizon is full
The pack is gone now and the cycle completes
Satisfy your hunger with the left overs ,if you can find any
And if not hold still, remain here
Fear me or love me it, shall mean nothing to me..
For its your chaos that bleeds
But still keep your arms around me
No matter how close you will always remain far
This lust that manipulates you
shall fade away if not now then very soon

Author's Note

Analysing my words will get you no where
So enjoy scene

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the cigarette metaphor incorporated in this...

keep your arms around me and we will fade together into oblivion...

[Nervana Zahran]

I love it, its beautiful...

[Jimmy Yetts]

Fascinating!
Great read, Yasmin.

[Confuser]

It is so full of emotions. ..The aggressive thoughts that feed my brain, a fallout of reality, a phantom that shreds dreams away. Oh, I'm really enjoying this! So many metaphors, the smile that squeezes colors..for it is your chaos bleed(ing)?, No more sighs to smoke, the horizon is full (my favorite line, I think) Really great poem. Thank you. 800 members tag (Poetry 101).

[Laura Lynn]

I see and hear yet do not analyze, I embrace this, these emotions,
"Fear me or love me it shall mean nothing to me
For its your chaos bleeds
But still keep your arms around me
No matter how close you will always remain far"

[Sami Khalil]

"A fall out of reality, a phantom that shreds dreams away
Mortality is the light and so mortality is never close or real
Abusing time breaking, the melody of my name "

You write marvelously Yasmin. I enjoyed every word...:)....................