Confused ?

Clueless :D

Confused?

Drops of ink draw

Few words on paper to grow

 

Breaking through my blood
absorbing my emotional flood

 

Yet emotions seem to be so weak

Perhaps it’s time for thoughts to speak

 

Few words before a violent brainstorm

For now a new poem is born

 

I struggle to breathe think write or talk

They’re all my enemies as I sink and choke

 

Maybe not, emotions appeal to be better

As it’s not time for the walls of silence to shatter

 

Confused? Confess this is a mind game

I seek your sanity not the halls of fame

 

Thoughts, emotions, perhaps a drink of both

Sweet, sour, poisoning full of loathe

 

A poet again? Maybe... Who knows?

For poetry has rules, bases and forms

 

365 days, I thought you've died my dear pen

Maybe I did… addicted to depression I thought was my fin 

 

Yet a glance of hope I seek as my words expose me now

So I leave this scene with a smile and a respectful bow 

Author's Note

It has been sometime well long time since my last poem so I thought maybe I should just write without thinking in the box...
Reviews are welcomed

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

the power of thoughts and emotions on our writing. Well done

[Yasmin]

oh thank you :)

[rnuff]

I just loved those last four lines, simply wonderful.

[M.Kilani]

What a great comeback! Very smart, flows effortlessly and relates easily, you have one typo though, "I struggle to breath(e), think, write or talk" otherwise it's perfect, glad your writer's block is over, hope to read more.
Keep it up.

[Yasmin]

Glad you think so and extremely glad you have read it
Thanks for the correction
I sure hope that as well
waiting for your new poems

[Sami Khalil]

I seek your sanity
not the halls of fame...
Well penned.

[Yasmin]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[Lily Mae]

I love this..and the emotional roller coaster I feel while reading it.. Shatter that silence.. why not? ;) xo

[Yasmin]

Glad you do It has been a while so I started doubting my ability :P
Thank you for an awesome review :)

[Lily Mae]

No doubts at all...keep penning.. :)

[Yasmin]

Thank you ^^