"Enjoy until ........."

Its a poem with suitable rhymes to depict that life is a special gift from God...... utilize it to its maximum n c that its proves to b useful for yourself and for others.........

Dreams come at night,
With some horror sight;
A question passes my mind that had i enjoyed my life,
Even though my schedule was tight;

Do the things that you like the most,
Don't wait for the time until  bread becomes a lovely toast;
You don't know when you may die and become a ghost,
You cannot understand life until you travel towards the coast;

Encourage the good ones,
Forgive the bad omens;
Don't be like a lion in the dens,
But dare to be a high flyer in the heavens;
See the light through the lens,
Observe every minute details until it descends;
Worship and respect God and every culture beyond ascent,
Remember your candle length each day lessens;

CREATE A RAY OF ENJOYMENT STREAK,
UNTIL YOUR BODY BEGINS TO FREEZE;
UNABLE TO FEEL THE CHILLING BREEZE,
BEGGING AGAIN FOR A NEW LIFE RELEASE.........

Author's Note

Please comment what u feel about this poem..... and your views whether good or bad are welcomed..... as it will help to improve my writing skills...... Thanku....

Reviews

[Sahil - Shore]

I really liked it... Beyond expectations....keep up!

[Riley]

This is a good poem, and advice everyone should take. Seeing the best out of life and making sure you live like you are dying. Sometimes everyone needs that reminder that today could be your last. Very great job conveying your message with this poem. And as for the title problem that Aditi mentioned, I believe it should have a stronger title for such a great poem, but at the end of the day it is your poem, and you are free to do with it what you want. Good luck and keep writing, you did an awesome job with this poem!

[Aditi Mahajan]

Good poem, but title isn't convincing.... Keep writing!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Encourage the good ones,
Forgive the bad omens;
Don't be like a lion in the dens,

Good lines. continue. My best regards.

[Niranjan Menon]

Really impressive and rhyming lines sankaran.....keep rocking on