Inhuman being

You know that i see your nightmares

You make fun of my fear

make me more scared everyday

i feel your fingers ripping my throat

You nip my chin strongly

your inhuman smile makes me tremble everytime

When someone takes your name

i feel a terrible sensation in my soul

and a paralyzing flashback comes in my mind

how you cramped me and jolted me down

and you bruised my body mercilessly

and now when i wake up in this glooming morning

i see that all the wounds on my body are vanished now

but then i wonder if the wounds on my soul will ever heal

and again my petrified body is thrown off in an endless bay!

until now i never knew the meaning of rape

and then i raise my head upwards in the sky

with tears in my eyes i say to my god

you showed me...you showed me...you showed me...

Reviews

[ttttt]

While the concept is intriguing, the lack of sensory detail makes it hard to immerse into. Fix that up & this could be great. Really make the audience feel what you felt- sensory details are key

[Siddhartha]

a cathartic release this.brims with poignancy...and despair.

[Khaaki]

a nice try... but the purpose eludes me here... it z v painful...

[Art Sun]

no one should have to endure the abuse of another,,,to escape its grasp is to have the opportunity to enjoy life again...

nice work...

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

Hmm the jump in time frame is a bit jolting but the work can be appreciated. Good job.