my fate

                       

Fate was never in my favour.. i was destined to be departed.. i knew my end;i knew evrything.. the path of our bond led us nowhere, then why parting from you has become so tough.. i have tried  all my senses to let my tears stay in my eyes.... but my instinct says to let them flow in a hope that... SOMEDAY YOU MIGHT LOOK BACK AND MY CLEAR EYES WILL EASILY RECOGNIZE YOU!!!!!!

                  

Reviews

[Art Sun]

nice work...thoughts that hold one to the very idea of your words...a sad separation with a hope from within...nice

[Twilight]

Emotional, sad and probably expressed from the heart. Even so, this does not meet my Contest criteria. Also, it includes some spelling errors and other flaws. However, thankyou for participating in my latest Contest! Keep writing!

[katee]

very nice

[em]

- absolutely - heartfelt and expressive writing - i agree with serah - well done! - instinct and hope are - always to be trusted - is what i think!

[SilentLullabies]

Very nice poem. I can also relate to it.

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. i can relate to this ... very well expressed ... and very heartfelt ...