The curse

The curse

A Poem by Nida Lodi
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I pity the society where girls are still bounded in the shackles of darkness.In this poem i have keyed in my feelings about how i feel when i am reminded again and again that i am a girl.

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She is intelligent but she is a girl,
                                               He is fool but he is a boy,
She is diligent but she is a girl,
                                               He is prodigal but he is a boy,
She is smart but she is a girl,
                                               He is imbecile but he is a boy,
All her proficiencies would not have been snuffed out if she could have got the previlege of being a BOY-"The Honour Of Honours"
All his mistakes would not have been neglected if he had the misfortune of being a GIRL-"The Curse of Curses"

© 2011 Nida Lodi


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Forceful feminist view in your piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. yes ... ancient foolishness ... paul and em are always right ... and so i agree with them ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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thnx:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- yes - i'm from Lucknow, India - :) - more power to you, girl - :) -

Posted 13 Years Ago


em frm rajasthan,India...
As a girl I too was compelled to do many a things that were against my will...i opposed and did what i wanted..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- absolutely hear where you're coming from - all the more reason for us - the women of now - to ensure that - we don't pass on these blinds and binds - to our girls - :) -

Posted 13 Years Ago


But in case of our society its still exists!
i wrote this when i was not allowed to go on our educational tour and my brother was allowed to go on his college's excursion!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- ancient foolishness indeed - like paul said - there's little time to look back - only looking ahead -

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes. a reminder of ancient foolishness' that still exist.

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Nida Lodi
Nida Lodi

Jodhpur, India



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